Lindberg

Contributor: Nick Marcantel

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The submarine was making its last run in the depths of the Baltic Sea after a long day of finding nothing of any interest. The crew had become restless and longed to return home after their disappointing voyage. Peter Lindberg, the submarine’s captain, gave into his crew’s wishes and decided to return.
“It’s okay, boss. We’ll just come back next week,” a jolly man by the name of Stephen Richards said as he patted Lindberg on the back.
“Yeah, of course,” Lindberg replied as he swallowed back his discontent. He wanted to find something in the Baltic Sea that he could be proud of, but after weeks of searching nothing even remotely impressive turned up on their sonars.
“Lindberg, do yah’ want some Vienna sausages,” another crewmate piped up struggling to speak as he had his mouth full of the sausages. Lindberg knew immediately that his crew was trying to make him feel better. He admired their efforts, but the only thing that would satisfy him was the treasure that lay at the bottom of the sea.
“No thanks, Johnson. I have to save my appetite for my wife’s dinner waiting for me when I get home,” Lindberg replied.
“Suit yourself. More for us then!” Richards said.
Lindberg chuckled at the response as he maneuvered the ship through the gentle ebb of the Baltic Sea. They were now halfway home when something stirred inside Lindberg’s gut. Something inside of him told him that he needed to try the sonar one last time.
“Richards, get up here!” Lindberg shouted moving away from the steering mechanism of the ship as he moved over to a large table set up with a whole bunch of knobs, buttons, panels, and equipment.
“What’s up? Is there something wrong?” Richards asked weary of the situation.
“Nothing’s wrong don’t worry. I want to check the sonar one last time,” Lindberg said as he powered the mechanism on.
“What’s the point, boss? We’re just on a dry streak; we’ll try again next week.”
“You may be right, but it can’t hurt to try.”
“Alright, whatever you say,” Richards said as he helped Lindberg power on the sonar. By turning a few knobs, pressing a few buttons, and running a few diagnostic checks; the sonar was ready to go.
“Ready?” Lindberg asked.
“Sure,” Richards simply replied as he watched his captain hit the button to start the scan on the ocean floor. They watched the red and green waves on the screen draw a picture of what lay beneath them. After a minute of nothing out of the ordinary turning up Richards completely dismissed the try, “See I told you we’re bad luck. Nothing there boss, just like I said-“
“Wait a minute, come take a look at this,” Lindberg said as he pointed at some strange anomaly appearing right before his eyes. The figure was still being mapped out by the scans, but they could see that it was round in shape and also quite large. Richard’s eyes bolted open as the miracle drew itself right before his eyes.
“What is that thing,” Richards said hardly believing what was happening to him.
“Guys, come see this quick!” Lindberg shouted to rest of the crew as they all ran up to the board to see the miracle at the bottom of the sea.
“Is that a UFO?” Johnson asked.
“I’m not sure. It looks like a giant Frisbee,” another crewmate chimed in.
“Whatever it is, lads. We have landed ourselves a goldmine,” Lindberg said looking around at his crew as giddy as could be.


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Choices

Contributor: Andrew Mang

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The man in the white mask and mechanic’s jumpsuit has been lying in the back of my vintage automobile for two hours. The masked man is patient - much more patient than I could ever be. The masked man has been all over the news for breaking into cars and murdering the unsuspecting drivers after the ignition sparks. Unsuspecting is the keyword. The problem is I am not an unsuspecting victim. I have been watching the masked man lay patiently in the back of my classic vehicle for two hours.
The scene is set: the air is frigid, the ground is wet, and the street lamp is dim.
I believe in fate and this must be my fate.
The masked man chose my car because of these perfect conditions. If I would have parked a few feet forward, or a few meters backwards, the street lamp would be beaming its light directly on my vehicle, and the masked man would be exposed.
Fortunately, this is not the case. I parked the car in such a way that the masked man chose me as his next victim. If that is not fate, then I do not know what is. When your time is up, then your time is up. How could I even challenge fate and ruin the glorious plan of the all-knowing universe?
I must get in my car.
My life should be flashing before my eyes, but all I see is darkness. It does make sense, since the last thirty years of my life have been pain, agony, and hopelessness because of my wife’s death. How could I see anything else but darkness? I hate to sound cliché, but this is the most I have felt since her passing. I know, after I turn that key, I will once again be with my love. My impending death has spawned absolute bliss. How beautiful. This is it. Fate is here and I am happy to accept the invitation.
Here I go.
Wait a minute. Where is the masked man? He is gone. I do not understand. This is my fate. My fate is to become another one of the masked man’s victims and to be reunited with my wife. I am content for the first time in thirty years, since knowing fate had found me and opened its door. Why would the masked man leave? Why would fate leave? That is not fate. That is selfishness. What do I know?
I know nothing.
What has happened to me? I was once strong, but now I’m weak. I was choosing to die by the hands of a killer. I choose to believe it was my fate, only to lessen the personal guilt, but ultimately I know it was my choice. My choices are my fate. I create my fate with every decision I make. Here I stand at the age of sixty, experiencing a period of enlightenment. Self-awareness is upon me and life is finally making sense. But this does not change my will to live and the masked man is back, and camouflaging himself in the backseat of my car. I am enlightened, yet I am destroyed. Fate is not murdering me tonight and a killer is not murdering me tonight. I am. I am choosing my fate. I am choosing to die.
I am choosing to get into my car.


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Invention Convention

Contributor: Tyson Hinz

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Cyrus began his ascent up The Great Tree. This tree was all he had known. Life beyond the tree was unimaginable. As he scaled the tree he thought of falling. How amazing it would be to free-fall thousands of feet to whatever it is that is below the clouds. This was something that his kind thought of quite often, and quite often did they take that leap. Cyrus thought of the joy they must have felt while falling. But was it worth it? They would die at the end but the fact of that last adrenaline rush being worth taking your own life astonished Cyrus. He could not understand how someone could take his own life no matter how hard it was to live it.
Cyrus, during his long life, thought that everyone on the tree should think in the same manner that he did. He could not understand how and why they did not think in his way. They were the same species they should all think the same, and Cyrus’s way of thinking was the best way.
“Kit, Al, you are smart boys. Always pay attention to your surroundings and love The Great Tree,” Cyrus preached to his two apprentices.
Cyrus arrived at his favorite branch; it reached further out than most. He could see a long drop down to the clouds, which were always below him. Cyrus had wondered what was below those clouds and he was going to find out. Cyrus ran from the half waypoint of the branch away from The Great Tree, his mind was full of thoughts and happiness that his questions were finally going to be answered, he was almost to the end of the branch when he slipped on a knot. His head struck the branch and he rolled down and fell through the clouds.
The people of the village celebrated his life. Most in mourning for the dead philosopher. The people knew Cyrus’s obsession with the free fall. Cyrus often made speeches about it to the people. He let them know all of his thoughts on the subject and why he thought people might of done it. He also told them why he might do it one day.
They knew how bold Cyrus was. They knew he took everything he did into deep consideration. So the mourning passed much easier for most of them knowing he left their lives in peace and happiness. The people easily got over his death because of that but never forgot about him.
“I know that Cyrus wouldn’t have chosen to die any other way,” whispered Kit to Al. They are both young and impressionable.
“We should go to the Cyrus Branch to pay our respects,” said Al.
So they went to the branch and sat in the middle of it. They dangled their feet off, pondering what it must have been like to leap off of The Great Tree, especially for Cyrus.
“All he ever spoke of was jumping off,” said Kit.
“Well I need to know what its like. I do not see a point in living here without Cyrus, there is nobody else here like him; there’s nobody that can teach me anymore than he did. If he didn’t die then he must be down there. If he did then I wouldn’t want anything more than to join him in the afterlife,” Al said.
“Oh come on, you know Cyrus would want you to experience all aspects of life before jumping,” Kit pleaded.
“I do not care,” said Al as he leaped off the branch.


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It doesn’t take much to inspire me. Just a glimpse of a leaf falling the right way could set me off on a 500-page novel – overhearing a conversation of simple small talk could spark an idea of a feature length script.
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And Justice For All

Contributor: Brian Coyle

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The day started as any other day. Frank makes his normal trip through the streets of Boston to his job at the docks. Passers by wave good morning and birds call out from nearby trees and power lines. Shopkeepers flip their signs from closed to open. Drunkards spill out of the local tavern and stumble into the cold, streets still wet from the morning dew. A middle-aged man sits on a stoop listening to a radio news broadcast. Frank can overhear the radio as he walks by.
“It is the dawn of another beautiful day in America. Albert Reilly, our beloved dictator has just announced his newest decree to increase restrictions brought in place by the recent embargo on... Frank walks out of the radio’s range.
Upon arriving at the docks, he notices something strange. The large wrought-iron gate that encloses the dock is closed and locked. He tugs at the lock and curses aloud. “Now Albert takes my job? What more can he take from us?”
Two police officers dressed in thick armor padding approach Frank. “Speaking out against your leader is a federal offense. You are under arrest.”
Frank attempts to explain that it is all just a misunderstanding. The officers laugh.
“What do you think? You think he is telling the truth?” One of the officers ask.
“I think what we have got here is a suspect resisting arrest. You know what we must do.” The two officers beat on Frank who manages to fight them back. Upon realizing that they cannot win, one of the officers equips their sidearm. “Turn around and get on your knees.”
Frank complies with the orders and gets on his knees, the sound of tires screech behind him. Just as he turns around, he sees a modified pickup truck fitted with a mounted machine gun barrel down the street, opening fire on the two police officers.
“We haven’t got much time. You need to come with us.” The driver of the truck shouts.
Without any other option, Frank runs towards the bed of the truck and climbs inside. The truck speeds away from the scene of the crime.


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Now I Understand

Contributor: Jerry Guarino

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“Sam, remember when we were in 4th grade, that night your sister Susan went to the college dance?”

“Sure do Joey. Why?”

“I was just thinking. We didn’t know why she was dressed that way or what goes on at a college. In just a couple years, we’ll be in college too.”

“Hopefully” said Sam.

“Well, yes, hopefully. It’s kind of funny how life has changed in just five years.”

“You said it Sam. I wonder what life will be like five years from now.”

“Yeah, I wonder.”

“You’ll probably still be dating Sarah, maybe even getting engaged.”

“And you’ll probably still be dating Mary, if you’re not married by then.”

“Could be. We’ve been going out for six months now. Unless I’m playing college football. You know those guys have lots of girlfriends.”

“Yeah.”

“Hey, you still want to be a doctor?”

“Sure. They make loads of money and drive fancy cars. I just have to get my science grades up. I think you have to get at least a “B” in science to get into medical school.”

“All “B’s” in science, I think. Nothing lower.”

“Wow. You think?”

“Sure. They don’t want any doctors who make mistakes.”

“What about math; I’m failing math.”

“No, math doesn’t count; you don’t need to know math to be a doctor.”

“Good. Hey, what do you want to be?”

“I don’t know. Maybe an engineer. I could design computer games and make lots of money. I’m really good on my X-Box.”

“I thought you were failing math.”

“No, you don’t need math to study computers, just be good at gaming.”

“So, in a few years we’ll be rich. Maybe we’ll want prettier girls by then.”

“Yeah. Better not get tied down with Sarah and Mary.”

“OK, but we should still take them to the sophomore dance, right?”

“Yeah. I think that would be OK. We can let them down easy in the summer. Give us time to plan for the future.”

“Hey what about your sister? How is she doing?”

“Susan. Yeah, she’s in college, but dating different guys. She says nothing serious.”

“Really? But she’s like 22. I thought by then girls are all engaged.”

“I guess not. But they sure are pretty in college. I was over at their library the other day and you wouldn’t believe these girls.”

“Hot, huh?”

“Totally. They all have long, straight hair and big boobs. And none of them have acne like high school girls.”

“Wow. Good thing we’re not getting tied down with Sarah and Mary.”

“Yeah. But they’re nice girls. Got my first feel with her. What about you?”

“Hmm.”

“What?”

“We did it last Saturday?”

“You what! No way.”

“I swear. Her parents were out and we were watching a movie, ‘I know what you did last summer’ with Jennifer Love Hewitt.”

“Yeah, and?”

“Well, we were making out when I saw Jennifer with a tight top on. My boner sprung to life. I thought it was going to pop my pants.”

“So?”

“So Mary saw it and thought she was getting me hot. She got so excited she started to take her top off. By then, it was all she wrote.”

“Dang. When were you going to tell me?”

“Mary said we should keep it a secret.”

“You did. For 3 days. Gimme five!”

“Yeah. Now you can’t tell anyone. If Mary found out, she’d never let me have it again.”

“You can trust me man. So, you have that movie on DVD?”

“Yeah, why?”

“I told Sarah we should stay in Saturday and watch a movie. Her parents are going out.”

“The future is bright, my friend. I’ll get you the DVD.”

“I’m just glad we’re guys.”

“Yeah. It’s a lot of work being a girl.”

“I hear you Joey. I hear you.”


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Jerry Guarino’s short stories have been published by dozens of magazines in the United States, Canada, Australia and Great Britain. His latest book, "50 Italian Pastries", is available on Amazon.com and as a Kindle eBook. Please visit his website at http://cafestories.net
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Growing Up Android

Contributor: R. F. Abercrombie

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“I don’t know what to do exactly,” she said. “I know what I want to do but I don’t...”
“It’s your choice,” he said. “No one can stop you.”
“You’re not helping.” She turned her coffee cup with long, tanned fingers. “We could wait another year.”
“You could wait a hundred years,” he said. “You’re only delaying your decision.”
“Again, not helpful.” She chewed on her lower lip. “What would he want?”
“He doesn’t want anything. He doesn’t care.”
She pulled her hands from the table and let them fall into her lap. “I’d like to think he cares a little.”
The man laughed. “He’s only following his programming. He’s not sentient. He doesn’t have feelings.”
“He does care about us.” She stared at her hands. “We’ve taught him so much.”
“He’s a learner bot and a house bot, that’s all. He doesn’t have emotions and he doesn’t understand them.”
She looked at him across the table, eyes bright and fierce.
“You never wanted him.”
“I warned you this would happen. They’re like pets. You can’t help but become attached to them.”
“You don’t care about him. You’d put him down like a dog.”
“If he was a dog and he was suffering and near death, yes, I’d have him euthanized. That’s not what we’re dealing with.”
“That’s what it feels like –- to me.”
The man rubbed his cheek. His unshaven face stung his hand. “What do you want to do?”
“It’s so silly. I want him to stay this age, I want him to stay my little helper.”
“So do it. He’ll be smarter than the average ten-year-old but, otherwise, he’ll be the same.”
“It’s not fair to him.”
“He’s not going to grow up, go to college, get married and have a family. He’s going to age out as a house bot. Our house bot, if that’s what you want.”
She began turning the cup again.
“Do you think he can hear us?”
“Probably. He’s knows us well. This is not a surprise to him.”
“He asked me about mod time the other day, as if he looked forward to it.”
“He was only seeking verification. He does it all the time.”
She stirred her coffee, then let the spoon clatter onto the tabletop.
“I keep thinking that I could teach him to care; to laugh, to cry, to have his own desires.”
“Please don’t go there.” He went to her and knelt by her chair and leaned his head on her arm. “You let him choose his name.”
“King Kwame Mumbambo Stevenson the Third.”
“You let him choose his hair style.”
“Blond dreadlocks definitely make a statement.”
They waited quietly, breathing together.
“He needs to be taller,” she said. “He likes to cook.”
“They can make him taller.”
“I know. They can do almost anything.”


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R. F. Abercrombie is a free-lance copywriter making his first excursions into the world of short fiction.
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Sticky Fingers

Contributor: Victoria Elizabeth

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The kite tugged, held captive between chubby fingers coated in sugary loam. Silk paper fluttering, it dove beneath the wind, turning cartwheels across an azure sky.

The eastern breeze blew, whipping the delicate crepe basilisk into a frenzy of color. Even the most tenacious of sticky fingers could not contain the power of a wayward wind, and so released the truculent string.

The dragon rejoiced. The child cried. The east wind blew on.


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Victoria Elizabeth Ann is a lifetime student of the arts, literature, and life as a whole. She is currently studying Creative Writing at Full Sail University and aspires to publish a novel in the near future.
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The Mandy Complex

Contributor: J. M. Tompkins

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I waited for her next to her black Honda Accord at two in the morning in the damp parking lot. Still, even after my stomach curled watching her strip on stage, I had a thing for her. Tall, lean and confident, she was everything I wanted to be. And everything I hated. With a clanging, the door of the windowless building swung open as Mandy appeared, walking over to me like a runway model.

Passing me without a word, she flung open the driver’s side door and slid in like liquid. I hurried to the passenger side, not wanting her to wait for me. As I clicked my seatbelt, she lit a cigarette and put the car in reverse.

“It was a shitty night making shit for money.” She blew smoke into the windshield and I watched curl in the street light.

“It’s just temporary, like you say.” I looked straight, directly out the window.

“Yeah, it’s just temporary.” She quickly glanced over at me. “I guess I’ll have to put the rent on the card this month.”

My mouth fell open as I turned to look at her, “What about the money your father just gave you? Didn’t he give you five hundred dollars? My last couple of shifts I was able to pull in four hundred, that’s rent.” I tried to drill holes into her skull with my eyes.

“Then groceries. We’ll have to put groceries on the card. Whatever, what does it matter?” She looked disgusted with me. “Money gets spent, cards get used.” Leaning back in her seat, she sped up the car.

“We’ll sit down tomorrow and take a look at the finances. I know we can skim back, save money and quit stripping. We can do this.”

She said nothing. She never said anything when I brought up cutting down expenses.

Ahead was our rental, three bedrooms and two baths. I never imagined in college I would live in a house. In front of it was a black viper, her boyfriend. He leaned against the back of the car, watching us. He looked like a wanna-be rocker, and he was too old to pull it off. What she saw in him, I’d never understand. I turned my head to the right so I could roll my eyes without either of them noticing.

As soon as I unlocked the front door, he picked her up and carried her honeymoon style up the stairs. I already knew I didn’t want to go to my room, they were always loud. The clock blinked two thirty and I yawned. I needed to keep busy, to keep from sleeping on the couch again. I cleaned the dishes in the kitchen and started picking up the soda cans in the living room. As I reached for one on the entertainment center, I noticed there was a new Blu-ray player. Seething with anger, I threw down the trash can and stormed out of the living room straight to my room. I tried to kill myself by holding a pillow against my face and fell sleep.

The next morning I washed our clothes while she slept in. I made her blueberry pancakes, her favorite, and carried them up the stairs on a tray. I knocked softly on her bedroom door.

“Yeah?”

I balanced the tray on one knee and turned the knob to swing open the door. “I made you pancakes.”

“Oh thanks, put them on the bed.” She was slipping on a robe and didn’t even look at me. I exited the room as quickly as I entered. In the hall, I remembered the blu-ray player and I needed to say something. Retreating, I found her door still slightly cracked.

I saw her back and, in the reflection of the mirror, her front. She danced, pointing her finger at herself and sending a seductive look into the reflection. She wore one of her stage outfits and slowly took it off, piece by piece. She looked happy, happier than I had ever seen her.

But she said she wanted to quit. I shut my eyes, holding back my tears and turning away. “We can make it, she can change.”


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J. M. Tompkins is a southern woman, wife and a lover of the craft of the written word. She writes poetry as well as dystopian fiction that searches for utopia within it's walls. We may not be able to deny the darkness, but we can always find the light.
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On Schedule

Contributor: Benjamin Goodwin

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This was going to be the start of a whole knew life for Roger. He had put in the time and seemingly endless hours at HyperTech International and now he was on his way to interview for his dream job. That morning, Roger had gotten up two hours earlier than he usually did. This was odd for Roger who had always been a man of very strict routine. He coordinated his days almost to the minute, leaving only a little time for scheduled daydreaming and free play. Roger believed that every wasted minute was one more minute he could be working toward his future. It had all been leading up to this. This was the moment he had been working for.

Their lobby was charming and ornate. They had a neat little koi pond with small fish swimming around. Roger approached the elevators and saw a lot of people had gathered and were getting into a recently arrived elevator. Roger decided he would take the next one. He didn’t want to be late and his interview was on the 37th floor. He could not afford to wait for all those people to get out one by one.

He instead got in the next one and quickly pushed the close door button as to not let anyone else slip in. He watched the numbers on the screen go higher and higher as he slowly ascended the building. He decided now would be a good time for some routine daydreaming. He hoped it would relax him before his interview. Roger closed his eyes and thought back to a day long ago.

It was April of last year and Roger was seeing a nice enough young lady from the human resources department of HyperTech. Her name was Leah and she had suggested they go to the cinema to see a newly released film. Roger did not remember the name of it. He had not expected for Leah to want to see a movie after dinner and had only scheduled two hours of date time in his mind. He was planning on using the rest of his evening to get a head start on his taxes and do a lesson with his German Rosetta stone tapes. He had bid Leah farewell and gave her a sincere apology that he would not be able to accompany her to the movie. She had ended things with him the next day.

When asked of her motivation for doing so, she simply said that he was not spontaneous enough. Roger then scheduled two ten-minute blocks of crying time for that day and the next.

Roger thought back to this day and remembered every detail. He was thinking of it so clearly, that he had not noticed that the elevator had stopped. Roger looked at his watch. He had fifteen minutes before he was supposed to be at the interview, so as long as it was fixed by then he would be fine. But it was not fixed by then. Hours started to go by and Roger eventually got tired of standing. He scheduled twenty minutes of sitting. He then scheduled a urination break in the corner of the elevator. Then he had fifteen minutes of jogging in place, ten more minutes of sitting, two hours of screaming for help, another urination break, half an hour of jumping jacks, twenty minutes of rocking back in forth while humming to himself, and two more hours of screaming for help. It was while he was beating his fists on the elevator door that his watch broke.

He immediately scheduled time to fix it, but then realized he couldn’t keep track of his schedule without a watch. This thought terrified every fiber of Roger’s being. He didn’t know what to do. He began having a panic attack and he fell to the floor trying to catch his breath. Eventually, he calmed down enough to turn his mind off. He put himself into an almost comatose state where he could slowly cope with this tragic turn of events. He slowly stood up after a while. He wished more than anything he could know how long that tantrum lasted so he could log it. Roger shook it off and started thinking rationally.

He looked to the ceiling and saw the one of the panels was lose. After many failed attempts, he was able to climb on top of the elevator. He saw the doors for the floor above and opened them up without much hassle.

He had missed his meeting by exactly eleven hours and nineteen minutes. Roger didn’t care at that point. He was just happy to be free. The security guard told him that they were aware of the broken elevator but they assumed no one was inside. Roger had not noticed the emergency call button. It really should have been the first thing he looked for.

On the drive home Roger daydreamed about that night with Leah. He wished he could remember the name of the movie she wanted to see. He would have loved to rent it.


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My name is Benjamin Goodwin. I'm very good looking and I play by my own rules.
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Waiting For a Train

Contributor: Brian Coyle

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Victoria arrives at the train station late one evening as she always does: her hair tied tightly back into a bun as to stretch back any unsightly features that may hang from her face and dressed in sleek, thoroughly-Ironed business attire. She takes her phone out from her purse and begins a text, all the while reading aloud what she is typing. “Just got to train station. Be there in thirty.” Normally she would make this trip alone: no one in their right mind wants to take a train this late, but for Victoria it was her only means to get to her downtown job on time. However, this time was different. She could smell him before she had seen him: an elderly man dressed in rags sitting quietly in the corner. Her perfectly painted eyes meet his sad and tired eyes for an instant before she looks away in disgust. “Please don’t make him come over here.” Victoria repeatedly whispers to herself. Her pleas for solitude fall on deaf ears as the vagabond limps forward and slouches down into the seat beside her own.

The old man tries his hardest to make himself look presentable: combing back his greasy gray hair before stating, “Well hello, miss. What’s yours that’s mine is Jasper?”

Victoria gives Jasper a look in disgust. “Charmed.”

“Charmed? My that’s an odd sort of name. But city folk ‘round here been namin’ their kin all sorts a peculiar things as I always say. You know I met this one fella in this station the other day, goes by the name Patron. Now what respectable person would name their son after a bottle of…” Victoria cuts Jasper off.

“Sir, would you kindly stop talking. Patron is a common name and mine is not ‘Charmed’. It’s Victoria. Now will you please leave me alone?”

Jasper sits back in his chair deep in thought and Victoria changes seats in a different section of the station. Moments later Jasper follows and sits beside her once more. “I like you, Victoria. You have a prettier name than all the others that come by to visit ol’ Jasper.”

“I did not come here to visit you, old man, and I don’t think anyone ever has. I just want to sit here and wait for my train to get here.” Victoria rummages through her purse and retrieves a small cellphone. The phone turns on with a beep and states that Victoria has neither new calls nor new messages.

“Well isn’t this just a fine how do you do. All ol’ Jasper trying to do is strike up a conversation with someone who looks as lonely as he and you cast him out. Do you like being alone, miss?”

“I am not alone, Jasper. I have plenty of colleagues at work.” She states as she places the phone back into her purse.

“Aye, but are they here now? Why do you not go with them instead of sitting alone at a train station?”

“There is a good reason for that. It is because…” Victoria’s voice trails off at the sudden realization that she has no real explanation to his question.

“Figured as much. I think I hear your train coming. Since you are too good for ol’ Jasper, I will leave you to your business. Good day to you, ma’am.” Jasper limps back to his corner of the station as the train rolls into a halt.

As the metal doors of the train slide open, Victoria rises from her chair and starts towards the awaiting vehicle, hesitating momentarily to gaze upon the lonely vagabond. Once more she checks her phone to find that she has still not received any messages. “Hey Jasper.” Jasper raises his head from a pile of newspaper. “Would you like to ride with me? There are plenty of open seats.”

Jasper jumps up with excitement. “You know in all my years I’ve been sitting in this station, no one has ever offered me a ride. Sure I’ll go with you.”

Victoria and her newfound friend step into the brightly lit train car and take their seats as the train drives off into the night.


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I am from Buffalo, N.Y. and am currently living and attending Full Sail in Orlando. Mostly I write for action but I am branching out into more dramatic pieces.
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